вот фразы, отобранные мною для перевода начала своего фанфика
как приятно, что при чтении фанфиков лично я занимаюсь действительно полезным и крутым делом
ибо попытка перейти в англоязычные писатели до сих пор удавалась только набокову. дак ведь он жил в осталые времена, когда мог украсть монополию, гад
начатые перевод себя нуждается в улучшении, и представляю что надо сделать.
но не только девочки-фикрайтерши со всего света принимают участие в этом достойном деле
в пределах старта мне потребуется (номер главы):
*they had her hostage - 4
*That wording made Hermione gulp (ух ты -3) - эта фраза заставила...
*she hung like that - 5
*Her left shoulder had dislocated by the time
*She was lucky Bellatrix hadn't been at the residence to offer putting her bicep back in its socket-2
*placing her hand on-3
*closing her eyes as -3
*As she parted away from him-3
*gripped her wrist and pinned it to the -3,5
*The Deatheater across from Draco -1 напротив
*Draco showed no reaction-3
*I'll take my chances-2
*Hermione showed as little expression as Draco had
*She would not give him the satisfaction of terrorizing her-2
* She could only guess why Draco wanted to
*turned from him and walked steadily out the - отвернулась и спокойно пошла
*The desire to... was overwhelming -2,3
*She wondered if death would be better than this-4
*wanted to least of all die a coward - меньше всего ей хотелось
*She closed the door behind her after she entered her cell-3
*visible bruises -заметные синяки
*it wasn't out of the kindness of his heart - это не по доброте душевной было
*Hermione knew he was just thinking of asthetics - 5?
*Hermione sank down the door to the floor, not allowing any tears to fall-3
*Her body shook with the effort not to cry-6,3
*Hermione didn't know how long she sat there on the ground
*She was so lost in thought that she had to supress an instictive scream when-3
*Hermione leapt to her feet - вскочить на ноги-1
*Draco slipped into the cell, closing the door behind him-3
*He saw her standing +location-3
*saw something strange in his silver eyes -3
*said through clenched teeth- поговорить сквозь сжатые зубы-5
*Draco awoke out of his own reverie - мечтательность-3
*started walking towards her-1
*to back her up - припереть к стенке, рук back was against the wall-3
* I'm not going to hurt you, Hermione didn't believe him-5
*She didn't want to drop her guard -4
*You may freely insult my bloodline. But, make no mistake that my intelligence is not impared by it -4
*I don't want you here-3
*I share your feelings, sire
*The scathing whisper had sent chills down Hermione's spine - режущий шопот заствил ее похолодеть-3
*her stony expression had faltered a little into fearful-3
*we're both as good as dead, he warned.
*Hermione frowned at him, realization creeping into her mind. This realization strangled her throat like a curse.-3
*Hear what ... exactly?-3
*Draco closed his eyes and bowed his head, still towering over her-3
*ominous - зловещий, scoffed
*he seemed to be no longer a threat-3 =может ему доверять
*This brough(T) Hermione (into?) extreme confusion - 3
*her assumption had been correct-2 к "не мог такого допустить
*Why, of all the times she was, did she have to be right? -4
*She closed her lips, swallowed, and glared up at him.-3
*I assure you that what punishments they can come up with are worse than it-3
*You have your father to protect you. I have no one. Why are you so concerned?"-3
*You've got me. Don't you see that?" не оч понятная фраза. ты взяла меня за живое? ты своего добилась? тогда-3
*I figured that you were brighter than this, Granger. Has it escaped your notice that whenever -3
*Hermione didn't let her expression soften-3
*Clearly, you were just bidding your time-купить оправдание? -4
*I've never been penetrated - это про это? not penetrated her yet-5
*, tears welling up в глазах стояли слезы -5
*How could they possibly know that - ну откуда им знать?-3
*The light fixture in the ceiling flickered, dimming the room momentarily - а вот это к соноросу
*Then, her heart broke. She couldn't handle it anymore
*The light fixture exploded, showering bits of fire down to the stone floor along with her tears spilling forth.-5, 6
*Just kill me, please! I'm begging you!"
*Draco glanced nervously at the door -3
*Well, they know now. Undress, Granger
*whimpering - нытье-3
*Draco clasped his hands around her biceps and threw her onto the bed-5
*as he loomed over her-5
*Hermione chanced a glance at his face-3
*Wh-?" she breathed but he clapped his hand over her mouth-3,5
*Draco nodded
*Hermione screamed, cursing and yelling-5
*Judging by the -5
*she was very convincing-5
*meeting his eyes.
*No, please don't!" she begged, the tears renewing again
*felt excruciating pain
*She felt her blood pooling against her skin - кровь приливает к коже?
*Draco shuddered and groaned dramatically-3,5
*He sprang off of her - так и пишут. зд - соскочил с нее
*She saw his shadow loom around the bed and sink down next to her.-5,6
*she breathed to him - прошептала ему
*assaulted - напасть
*rose off the bed -3
*He glanced back at Hermione over his shoulder-3
*a neverending waterfall of tears streaming down Hermione's face-3
*Draco saw something flicker in her eyes. She meant it.-3
*responsibility lies with you. - ответсвенность лежит на вас -3
будем в каждом случае посмотреть, заменять или на заменять на эти безопасные выражения то что лично мне приходит в голову, потому что очаг генерации английского у меня тоже уже есть
блин, какие полезные эти гермионины страдания, всем! доказано строго по науке
не могу сказать, что старт неудачный, ибо фразы взяты из любимых фиков пришедших подписантов
а главное необходимость заставляет меня понять, о чем же все таки бубнит вторая глава
а еще я хочу безоговорочно завоевать англоязычных. думаю, придет успех, придет. на фф поприще хотя бы
как приятно, что при чтении фанфиков лично я занимаюсь действительно полезным и крутым делом
ибо попытка перейти в англоязычные писатели до сих пор удавалась только набокову. дак ведь он жил в осталые времена, когда мог украсть монополию, гад
начатые перевод себя нуждается в улучшении, и представляю что надо сделать.
но не только девочки-фикрайтерши со всего света принимают участие в этом достойном деле
в пределах старта мне потребуется (номер главы):
*they had her hostage - 4
*That wording made Hermione gulp (ух ты -3) - эта фраза заставила...
*she hung like that - 5
*Her left shoulder had dislocated by the time
*She was lucky Bellatrix hadn't been at the residence to offer putting her bicep back in its socket-2
*placing her hand on-3
*closing her eyes as -3
*As she parted away from him-3
*gripped her wrist and pinned it to the -3,5
*The Deatheater across from Draco -1 напротив
*Draco showed no reaction-3
*I'll take my chances-2
*Hermione showed as little expression as Draco had
*She would not give him the satisfaction of terrorizing her-2
* She could only guess why Draco wanted to
*turned from him and walked steadily out the - отвернулась и спокойно пошла
*The desire to... was overwhelming -2,3
*She wondered if death would be better than this-4
*wanted to least of all die a coward - меньше всего ей хотелось
*She closed the door behind her after she entered her cell-3
*visible bruises -заметные синяки
*it wasn't out of the kindness of his heart - это не по доброте душевной было
*Hermione knew he was just thinking of asthetics - 5?
*Hermione sank down the door to the floor, not allowing any tears to fall-3
*Her body shook with the effort not to cry-6,3
*Hermione didn't know how long she sat there on the ground
*She was so lost in thought that she had to supress an instictive scream when-3
*Hermione leapt to her feet - вскочить на ноги-1
*Draco slipped into the cell, closing the door behind him-3
*He saw her standing +location-3
*saw something strange in his silver eyes -3
*said through clenched teeth- поговорить сквозь сжатые зубы-5
*Draco awoke out of his own reverie - мечтательность-3
*started walking towards her-1
*to back her up - припереть к стенке, рук back was against the wall-3
* I'm not going to hurt you, Hermione didn't believe him-5
*She didn't want to drop her guard -4
*You may freely insult my bloodline. But, make no mistake that my intelligence is not impared by it -4
*I don't want you here-3
*I share your feelings, sire
*The scathing whisper had sent chills down Hermione's spine - режущий шопот заствил ее похолодеть-3
*her stony expression had faltered a little into fearful-3
*we're both as good as dead, he warned.
*Hermione frowned at him, realization creeping into her mind. This realization strangled her throat like a curse.-3
*Hear what ... exactly?-3
*Draco closed his eyes and bowed his head, still towering over her-3
*ominous - зловещий, scoffed
*he seemed to be no longer a threat-3 =может ему доверять
*This brough(T) Hermione (into?) extreme confusion - 3
*her assumption had been correct-2 к "не мог такого допустить
*Why, of all the times she was, did she have to be right? -4
*She closed her lips, swallowed, and glared up at him.-3
*I assure you that what punishments they can come up with are worse than it-3
*You have your father to protect you. I have no one. Why are you so concerned?"-3
*You've got me. Don't you see that?" не оч понятная фраза. ты взяла меня за живое? ты своего добилась? тогда-3
*I figured that you were brighter than this, Granger. Has it escaped your notice that whenever -3
*Hermione didn't let her expression soften-3
*Clearly, you were just bidding your time-купить оправдание? -4
*I've never been penetrated - это про это? not penetrated her yet-5
*, tears welling up в глазах стояли слезы -5
*How could they possibly know that - ну откуда им знать?-3
*The light fixture in the ceiling flickered, dimming the room momentarily - а вот это к соноросу
*Then, her heart broke. She couldn't handle it anymore
*The light fixture exploded, showering bits of fire down to the stone floor along with her tears spilling forth.-5, 6
*Just kill me, please! I'm begging you!"
*Draco glanced nervously at the door -3
*Well, they know now. Undress, Granger
*whimpering - нытье-3
*Draco clasped his hands around her biceps and threw her onto the bed-5
*as he loomed over her-5
*Hermione chanced a glance at his face-3
*Wh-?" she breathed but he clapped his hand over her mouth-3,5
*Draco nodded
*Hermione screamed, cursing and yelling-5
*Judging by the -5
*she was very convincing-5
*meeting his eyes.
*No, please don't!" she begged, the tears renewing again
*felt excruciating pain
*She felt her blood pooling against her skin - кровь приливает к коже?
*Draco shuddered and groaned dramatically-3,5
*He sprang off of her - так и пишут. зд - соскочил с нее
*She saw his shadow loom around the bed and sink down next to her.-5,6
*she breathed to him - прошептала ему
*assaulted - напасть
*rose off the bed -3
*He glanced back at Hermione over his shoulder-3
*a neverending waterfall of tears streaming down Hermione's face-3
*Draco saw something flicker in her eyes. She meant it.-3
*responsibility lies with you. - ответсвенность лежит на вас -3
будем в каждом случае посмотреть, заменять или на заменять на эти безопасные выражения то что лично мне приходит в голову, потому что очаг генерации английского у меня тоже уже есть
блин, какие полезные эти гермионины страдания, всем! доказано строго по науке
не могу сказать, что старт неудачный, ибо фразы взяты из любимых фиков пришедших подписантов
а главное необходимость заставляет меня понять, о чем же все таки бубнит вторая глава
а еще я хочу безоговорочно завоевать англоязычных. думаю, придет успех, придет. на фф поприще хотя бы
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